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Laura
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hi guys! this is my first not offhanded portrait. i know i need to improve, but with your adds will be easier!
thanks for looking, comment and criticize
Distancia focal 120mm
Velocidad de obturación 1/250 sec
Apertura f/3.5
ISO/Pelicula 250Buenas noches Yoque,
I like the portrait, lovely expression on the subjects face and good eye contact. I think it’s an overall nice natural looking portrait. I am sure someone can give you some extra info on lighting etc but very nice.
Al
Yoque, nice portrait. Just the expression is a little forced almost clenching teeth might be from trying to look back at camera. Did you use a reflector as seems to be a gold cast on face (girls right side) and hair, its prob personal taste but white or silver can work well.
JMac-2006 wrote:
Yoque, nice portrait. Just the expression is a little forced almost clenching teeth might be from trying to look back at camera. Did you use a reflector as seems to be a gold cast on face (girls right side) and hair, its prob personal taste but white or silver can work well.
yes… in fact, it isn’t a “reflector” xD nay it was a sheet… pretended to be white, but yellow at end
i don’t have any lights system, just a flash and i had to improvise hehehe
thanks for comment guys!!
Stunning model. Her expression does look a bit forced but at the same time her eyes as smiling (if you know what I mean…).
Her eyes do look a bit too white though. Also I wonder if a small crop at the bottom of the photo would help the composition.
Seems to be a little bit too much body / too long for me. Just an opinion of course.Lovely photo, but would probably crop tighter as Mark Suggested. Lose some of the body and move the eyeline up.
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