Lily

[thomas]

June 30, 2012 at 10:40 pm

Hi, would appreciate people views on this, good or bad.

Thanks, Thomas

[shutterbug]

July 1, 2012 at 6:55 pm

Hi Thomas,
A nice portrait, pretty little thing with a cheeky grin, a couple of things that comes
to mind is the empty space either side, I would crop away most of it as IMO it is
not adding much to the overall shot. A slight boost in contrast to give it a little more
punch as it is coming across as a touch “shades of grey” rather than black and white.

But I like it, and hope these suggestions help some. :)

[thomas]

July 3, 2012 at 2:42 pm

Thank you for your suggestions Jenny, much appreciated.

I have been away from photography for a few years and am getting back into it, there is much I have forgotten.
I will go back into Lightroom and see what I can come up with.