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Local Designer: Editorial
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the hand on the mouse doesn’t really work for me as the shoulders are not facing the commuter so she’s clearly not just looking up from work… in fact i would probably crop off the right side of the image as the only thing using the space is the apple and unless they’re sponsoring you or her id leave it out making the composition less central. anyway the white is all you need to see to know its a mac
just my opinion though, I’m not a portrait photographer
Perhaps you might have moved the computer to left and have subject looking to camera, the flower i’m not sure adds anything other than nice colour if it was placed and composed with no book shelf it would be more pleasing to me.
Great lighting
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