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Luke
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I tend to read more than post here but decided to throw up two pics I want C&C on.
Just one I liked with the natural lighting from the window. Notice the drool on his t-shirt :)
This one, I’m really looking for pointers on the monochrome conversion. Do you think it looks ok?Hi Darren.
Regarding the first, I like the use of natural light, and you’ve
got it sharp where it matters most – at the eye. The raised
hand is distracting though, as are the blown highlights on
the little chap’s forehead.I like the conversion on the second, nice contrast and good
and sharp. Compositionally it isn’t helped by the heavily
patterned clothing which makes the image appear cluttered,
and it’s a shame the father’s right eye is obscured. But you
asked about the conversion, and to my eye it’s spot on.Rob.
I like the first,
the personality shines through,
and I read the arm as a wave,
which is quite cute,
and may be telling a story-The processing could be revisited,
especially if it was shot in raw-
but for a shot like this,
I wouldn’t be too worried-They grow up so fast,
you’ve got to get what you can,
when you can-I’d agree with Rob completely about the second-
and there’s a general awkwardness and fussiness about the arrangement too-j
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