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Mahon River
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Two from a while back. Only got round to processing them now.
What do ye thinK?
Nice (realistic) movement in the water.
Unfortunatley, in the first, the foreground interest rock isn’t that interesting IMO and I kind of want to look over it or behind it.
The second is spot on.
Hi Eshortie,
I dont have much experience in timed exposures
but the first thing that I notice is the lack of colour
in these, I think the saturation could be pumped
up a bit.Yes #2 seems to me to be a stronger one.
Nice,
Alan
Thanks all,
I found the composition worked a little better with the inclusion of the foreground rock Des, but would agree it isn’t exactly interesting.
Looking at them now I see what you mean, the greens are very weak in both
Both smashing shots. I think they could both do with cropping from the top though. The bland white sky peeping through the trees makes the colours seem watered-down, cutting it out makes a stronger colour composition i.m.o.
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