Yes the work for me. The 1st has a slightly green tinge (not sure if that is intentional??) 2nd, lovely stylish portrait. Your model has piercing eyes and you capture this nicely. The 3rd I just love the static energy you have captured here and again withe the eye. This is my favourite and the 4th nice alternative capture of the female form with a kind of 40’s feel to it. These are as good as you have produced, Well done!
I really like the second and fourth shots. I’m very much an amateur, so you can take my comments “with a pinch of salt”. For me a slightly tighter crop of the left of the frame would improve the overall image. The pose is great but the line of the dress where it meets the hair disrupts the flow of the back line. I love everything else about this photograph.
The fourth one is a beautiful image, imaginative, and well executed.
Number three by a country mile, very engaging image. I’m not a fan of such
heavy post-processing work on skin tones. It makes the skin appear plastic
and unrealistic. There are techniques for skin softening that are far less
destructive and leave the skin looking more natural. Very nice model by
the way…