Maya

[Bartek Witek]

July 25, 2008 at 11:26 am

Just wondering what you all think…

Cheers

Bart

[fstop89564]

July 25, 2008 at 12:02 pm

Bart
I like this one a bunch……it is not the norm and the smile she has made me smile big…..a good way to start the day over here on this side. I like the processing as well……I would move your http://www.bwitek.eu to the bottom and or make is smaller as it distracted me , my eyes kept going to it. Nice job.

Tim

[Bartek Witek]

July 25, 2008 at 12:13 pm

fstop89564 wrote:

Bart, I like this one a bunch……it is not the norm and the smile she has made me smile big…..a good way to start the day over here on this side. I like the processing as well……I would move your http://www.bwitek.eu to the bottom and or make is smaller as it distracted me , my eyes kept going to it. Nice job.Tim

Thanks a lot Tim. I have been thinking placing the http://www.bwitek.eu on the bottom, but it was distructing more than now, and covering a step as well. I did not like it. All the best…

[fig]

July 25, 2008 at 2:30 pm

just to let you know http://www.bwitek.eu/ doesn’t seem to work but http://bwitek.eu/ does.

[Bartek Witek]

July 25, 2008 at 3:50 pm

fig wrote:

just to let you know http://www.bwitek.eu/ doesn’t seem to work but http://bwitek.eu/ does.

Both of them are working ;) but not exactly, because there is only one page appearing on the screen, the address working no matter which way…

[RGH_Photography]

July 26, 2008 at 8:49 am

I would lose the web address ! sure we can see that its your post and even if you had to add it why so big and bold ?
As for the shot the little girls smile looks very natural but am not fussy about the grain and made a tighter crop the extra space doesnt add much to the shot

[Martin]

July 26, 2008 at 10:31 am

Very nice. Would lose the banner at the top with the web address. Not a big fan of the grain effect either would lose this, the shot is strong enough and doesn’t need any effects so just keep it simple

M

[Bartek Witek]

July 27, 2008 at 7:21 pm

Thanks a lot for the comments! I appreciate!!

Cheers

Bart

[pihjin]

July 27, 2008 at 8:19 pm

I agree with people above… perhaps try putting the web address into a black frame around the picture so it doesn’t obstruct it.

Great shot and I love her shoes but I think the grain looks a little uniform. I’m guessing you added it later yes? As it’s on her face but not on her shoes or hand.

I think a different grain filter with a more random and subtler effect would look much better if you want to go for grain.