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  • positron
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    This is our three month old daughter, Maya. This was not planned as you can probably tell, t it was her playtime on the sofa, and the sheets accidentally collapsed around her, and she liked it.

    I am thinking of doing this on to a canvas, any comments, suggestions, thoughts are all welcome!

    regards,
    Pos.

    Sodafarl
    Member

    Pos,
    You probably couldn’t have planned that shot if you wanted to.
    You have captured the moment perfectly and your daughter is a wee beaut.
    The only thing I would do to it is crop it from about the button. The out of focus part of the legs is a bit distracting IMHO.

    Soda

    DPS
    Participant

    Hi Maya,
    I agree with Soda I would crop out the out of focus section at the end,when this is cropped you will be drawn in a lot more to your daughters pretty eyes. Lovely shot.
    Cheers

    MannyC
    Participant

    Beautiful capture, love them at this age!!!! I agree with Soda, a square crop would suit this capture.

    positron
    Member

    Bizzare how I never saw that crop..! Thanks Sodafari, DPS and Manny, it does make sense as the lower half is adding nothing to the over all image. I might get a landscape / square print out of his..!

    MannyC
    Participant
    RASMITH32
    Member

    I like it but you DOF and focus point has left the left eye soft , for me the full face should be sharp in this shot. Nice shot nonetheless

    positron
    Member

    Thanks RAS, I can see it now that you mentioned it. Ah well, fingers crossed no one would see it in a canvas print. :wink:

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