I agree with SteveD. The colours aren’t punchy enough, (better in the edited version) so getting back there if you can with better light would deliver a cracking shot
But I think the composition is great and it is a really lovely scene :)
Can someone tell us newcomers to this great hobby of ours, the best way to go about getting more vibratant colours in a scene like this. One way I presume is via Photoshop. Early AM or the last hour before sunset, a polariser filter, any other tricks of the trade…..