Caught this one at the Causeway the other day. Think it could probably do with a crop a bit tighter (and probably try to bring out a bit of detail in her face) but something about the intent expression as she sent that text message spoke to me. I was already at 300mm too, so I couldn’t really get in any tighter without being more obvious than I already was :)
Crop the top off the photograph, also maybe try increasing the slider in the Shadows option,
might reduce the shadows on her face and bring out more detail
Pity the people are behind her as they’re a bit distracting