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  • Joey C
    Participant

    My 14 mth old daughter likes to hang out in a clothes basket!
    400d, w/50mm 1.8.

    Let me know what you think pls..all C&Cs welcome.
    thanks
    joe

    Tiny
    Member

    Nice shot, love the B&W, might be a tad nicer if you could se a little bit more of the baby’s hand on the far right of the pic, but over all.. its nice well done

    Joey C
    Participant

    Thanks Niall. appreciate it.
    joe

    Cookster
    Participant

    Nice image . Like the strong arm lifting the child towards her point of interest. Could do with a bit of dodging to the right of the arm imo.

    jodal1975
    Participant
    Anonymous
    Participant

    I love everything about it!
    I might like it a little sharper but that’s probably
    more a posting issue than a technical one.

    shutterbug
    Participant

    It is a lovely shot Joey, but I think it would have been even better if the man’s hand
    had not been in it. Perhaps a little dark but the she has a lovely expression on her
    little face, you could maybe crop out the arm I don’t think it would matter that she would
    be very close to the right hand side of the frame, it would actually give her more space
    to look into. Just an opinion of course :)

    Zargon
    Member

    Nice shot Joe , I would re crop to take out some of the black of the left of the hand and maybe the top, to tighten the image , I find there is too much darkness on the left ..but thats just my opinion…Great shot and nice processing well done.
    Clive.

    Alan Rossiter
    Participant

    I’d agree with Clive on this one – nice shot, soft to the view and the eyes really draw your attention.

    Alan

    Shutterlight
    Member

    Great image Joe.
    Not too dark for me – the strength of the image is in the contrast.
    Wud crop a fraction of the left though.

    Gerry.

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