I get the idea here, but for me, it needs to be a little more abstract to work, otherwise, it just looks like a tilted building. I think it’s the fact that I can see the ground, and it’s not level…it gives the eye a reference point and the brain says “not level!’. Although, I’m no expert on this sort of thing, and I’m struggling with ideas for the geometry round myself…it’s way outside my comfort zone.