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My First Model Shot!

  • johnnycorcoran
    Participant

    My FIRST Model shots as just playing around the off flash. She is a mate of mine and she have never done any modeling before.Hope you like it…
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    VIEW MORE (Design a Book for my friend) http://www.blurb.com/bookstore/detail/1701949

    tommykelso
    Member

    Nice mood and feel to these… Lighting/wxposure is spot on

    Would love to see her left eye tho in the first shot

    RASMITH32
    Member

    THese are great shots!. After a disasterous portrait shoot pre Xmas when all I wanted to do was hang up the bag, you’ve sparked my interest again!

    lets go through them because they are all worth a mention

    1. Brilliant. Love the colour/detail in the models eye and the way it runs into the blue in the background, Processing nice and vignetting suits. Only problem is if you look to the very top the layers need to be aligned. This is my favourite

    2. Good. Nice DOF. The background to the right of the model is a little distracting though

    3. LOvely shot, nicely exposed but I’d like to see her eyes

    4. Again nice shot/crop. Almost has a cross processed feel to it which I am a fan of in B&W

    5. Nice shot though probably one of my least favorites as I feel she disappears into the background

    6. Brilliant again. Love everything about this shot from composition through to exposure and DOF what were you setting for this one?.

    7. As above but I prefer 6

    8 & 10 Nice shots but have cropped too much of her head for me.

    9. NIcely exposed again but too much white space above her head

    11. Brilliant again. One of my favorites. Love her eye contact and the colouring in the image is great, really works. How did you process this one?

    In relation to preference for me its …..

    6, then 1 and then 11

    Well done, great set.

    JMac-2006
    Participant

    great first shoot

    #1 (though would like to see both eyes but personal pref and only minor) and #7 for me are the standout images – #11 is great processing

    ps. your mate should do modelling

    tsergairl
    Member

    i’ve got only one question to author:

    WHY SHE IS so sad on every pix??, more smile :-)

    anyway very nice set :-)

    Chris

    RASMITH32
    Member

    So JC, Care to share how you processed no. 11????

    Really cool shots for first model shoot, love the processing of no 1, not too fond of the expression in no 2 or the crop but for the a first model shoot and a first time model ,really well done

    johnnycorcoran
    Participant

    Hi all, thanks for the feedback… :-D
    If anyone wonder how to do number 11… Here’s the link
    http://tuts4you.co.cc/super-easy-typographic-portrait-in-photoshop/

    johnnycorcoran
    Participant
    RASMITH32 wrote:
    THese are great shots!. After a disasterous portrait shoot pre Xmas when all I wanted to do was hang up the bag, you’ve sparked my interest again!

    6. Brilliant again. Love everything about this shot from composition through to exposure and DOF what were you setting for this one?.

    Did use 1/160 sec F9
    ISO 100
    Focal Length 70 mm (70-200mm F4 L)
    and Canon 580 EX Flash with wireless (Put those on the ground on the left side)

    DaveMurdoch
    Participant

    Beautiful model and beautiful shots!!

    Hard to believe i was the first time for both of you :shock:

    miki g
    Participant

    Both of you did extremely well in these. Hard to believe that neither of you done this sort of stuff before. Well done

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