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My First Model Shot!
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johnnycorcoranParticipant
My FIRST Model shots as just playing around the off flash. She is a mate of mine and she have never done any modeling before.Hope you like it…
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tommykelsoMemberNice mood and feel to these… Lighting/wxposure is spot on
Would love to see her left eye tho in the first shot
RASMITH32MemberTHese are great shots!. After a disasterous portrait shoot pre Xmas when all I wanted to do was hang up the bag, you’ve sparked my interest again!
lets go through them because they are all worth a mention
1. Brilliant. Love the colour/detail in the models eye and the way it runs into the blue in the background, Processing nice and vignetting suits. Only problem is if you look to the very top the layers need to be aligned. This is my favourite
2. Good. Nice DOF. The background to the right of the model is a little distracting though
3. LOvely shot, nicely exposed but I’d like to see her eyes
4. Again nice shot/crop. Almost has a cross processed feel to it which I am a fan of in B&W
5. Nice shot though probably one of my least favorites as I feel she disappears into the background
6. Brilliant again. Love everything about this shot from composition through to exposure and DOF what were you setting for this one?.
7. As above but I prefer 6
8 & 10 Nice shots but have cropped too much of her head for me.
9. NIcely exposed again but too much white space above her head
11. Brilliant again. One of my favorites. Love her eye contact and the colouring in the image is great, really works. How did you process this one?
In relation to preference for me its …..
6, then 1 and then 11
Well done, great set.
JMac-2006Participantgreat first shoot
#1 (though would like to see both eyes but personal pref and only minor) and #7 for me are the standout images – #11 is great processing
ps. your mate should do modelling
tsergairlMemberi’ve got only one question to author:
WHY SHE IS so sad on every pix??, more smile :-)
anyway very nice set :-)
Chris
RASMITH32MemberultrovoiletoneMemberReally cool shots for first model shoot, love the processing of no 1, not too fond of the expression in no 2 or the crop but for the a first model shoot and a first time model ,really well done
johnnycorcoranParticipantHi all, thanks for the feedback… :-D
If anyone wonder how to do number 11… Here’s the link
http://tuts4you.co.cc/super-easy-typographic-portrait-in-photoshop/johnnycorcoranParticipantRASMITH32 wrote:THese are great shots!. After a disasterous portrait shoot pre Xmas when all I wanted to do was hang up the bag, you’ve sparked my interest again!6. Brilliant again. Love everything about this shot from composition through to exposure and DOF what were you setting for this one?.
Did use 1/160 sec F9
ISO 100
Focal Length 70 mm (70-200mm F4 L)
and Canon 580 EX Flash with wireless (Put those on the ground on the left side)DaveMurdochParticipantBeautiful model and beautiful shots!!
Hard to believe i was the first time for both of you :shock:
miki gParticipantBoth of you did extremely well in these. Hard to believe that neither of you done this sort of stuff before. Well done
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