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My first upload
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Hi Everyone.
Im new on PI (jined tonight) and its my frst upload.
So if its messy, too big or anything – i apologize. Ill try to do it right though.I really want to know what you think about these ones., so feel free to criticize.
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No.3
Hi Ola.
The first 2 of these are quiet good. You have isolated the subject well from the background & the exposure is good in both. The subjects may be too central, but I think they look fine.
The third shot doesn’t really work for me though. I think that it needs better composition. The lighting is also very harsh. The tree on the left is very bright & the bushes on the right are in shadow. A less sunny day would help. I think you need a dominant subject in this as the eye tends to wander around the scene. The location looks like it has some potential for some really nice shots.
Well done on a very good first uploadHi Miki.
Thank you so much for your comment :)
I know that third one doesnt look real(?) but there is something in it that i like. Dont know.
But Im jus at the beginning so… im looking forward to read all the critics.Thank you once again!!!
Ola
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