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My first Wedding

  • StuieC
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    PhotoSligo
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    If it was 1st time ,so you did well. I would like to do it like this in my first wedding.
    It is my privat & honest reply:

    1-o yes!, like moment, emotion, framing, very nice (maybe i will cut out wall on left)
    2- do not like gradient , photo ok, but looks like photos from my father album (back to 80’s) Couples might like it.
    3- dark, poses, i will not take a shot of bride from back at this situation as her back looks not to good.

    Regards,
    Darek

    b318isp
    Participant

    Stuart, I agree with Darek’s reply. I’d add that the convesionj in #1 is very good. #2 might be better with an oval vignette instead. The set up in #3 is a great idea and the bounced flash works well, but the bride does (in perspective) appear bigger.

    StuieC
    Member

    b318isp wrote:

    Stuart, I agree with Darek’s reply. I’d add that the convesionj in #1 is very good. #2 might be better with an oval vignette instead. The set up in #3 is a great idea and the bounced flash works well, but the bride does (in perspective) appear bigger.

    Looking back now I agree with you regarding the 3rd shot. Framing in first needs work. (2nd) I was just playing around with. Not big into the style.

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