David these look like 2 well composed shots although a bit small…………but I don’t get the idea in #2 :?: Just dosn’t work for me :!: I think this would work well either in Mono or colour :?:
Lovely feel to the shot and a wonderful moment captured.
Overall the shot is soft, especially where it should be sharp (i.e. where she is). Watch your shutter speed – 1/50 is possible to handhold, but difficult. Also at f5 you need to make sure you’re focusing on the right thing in the frame. Getting lower, down to the childs perspective would also help the shot.