hi, get ur model to stand further from the backdrop, then light the backdrop with one of ur lights and use the other to light the model, think that would be a good starting point
yeah , agree with ras……the creases are showing up in your back drop… i might also add there seems to be slight camera shake . get a tripod or up the shutter speed …..ofcourse its easy for me to sit here and throw up ideas …ive never used a backdrop or lights! :-) just my observation though :-)
hmmm…how do you position ur lights? i can see a tiny catchlight is this ur on-camera flash? my suggestion is to put one light on a shelf and use just one of them till you get more experience. You can throw any questions you have and I’d be happy to help.