Paul, as you can see the Art Nude section is fairly quiet. :)
Anyhow, I know nothing about this genre or indeed studio photography in general.
My only comment would be that the 3rd image the b+w one, seems a bit dull in terms of contrast.
Just a conversion thing I guess.
Hi Paul,
While I’ve no doubt about Holly and Amy’s posing ability, to me these images have some issues.
In the colour images, the skin tones are way off, being too yellow or too blue. All the images are underexposed also.
If you’ve shot in Raw, all of these are fixable with ease fortunately. With Jpeg, it’s a little harder, but still doable.
Lighting wise one or two of the shots would look better with a separation light to give a lift off the background.
A great first attempt. The expression on the faces is still important in art-nude work. They look a lttle bored in these. Did you take a long time setting up each shot? Mind you, it’s difficult to stop Holly and Amy giggling!