Conversion looks okay to me..maybe a tad more contrast needed..something I’m often told myself… :D
Since we’re here to learn to, I’ll pass on a useful tip I’ve learned from people on the site here when it comes to photographing children. It always pays to get down to their level when shooting them, instead of top down. It engages the child more and makes for a more pleasing shot. She’s a lovely looking child with gorgeous eyes…so it would definitely improve the shot.
It is a little soft okay…but worth going back and trying again. You’ll be glad I reckon :D