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Old Head of Kinsale
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Composition: Perhaps you needed to take 2 paces back (to position the large bale in the front a bit more to the 1/3 from teh right hand side) and stood up about a foot (to give more seperation between the top of the bale and the horizon).
Contrast: perhaps the toning is too strong to allow some contrast between the various shades. This also takes away from teh potential imapct of the headland. I think there is probably more happening in the sky than the toning allows. Perhaps this is a long-winded way of saying that I don’t think the toning works!
I agree with Brian about the toning perhaps a straight B&W would work better
I do like the comp and perhaps more detail could be brought out in the skyCathal
Thanks lads, appreciate the C&C. I’ll have a think about what you said.
Cheers
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