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Orange Brolly

  • sirvad
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    5faythe
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    Hi Sirvad,

    Nobody dipping their toes in the water on this one so you’re stuck with me again. :?

    I think I can see where you were going with this one but I can’t help feeling that there
    are too many other colours in the frame for this to work really successfully.

    Maybe it’s the yellow bus.

    It’s a very good try though.

    I can imagine that brolly in a street full of contrasting colours.

    Maybe others think differently.

    Cheers.

    John.

    sirvad
    Member

    thanks john for your thoughts, really appreciate them. as for the lack of others comments i just come to the conclusion that its that bad people dont bother with it. i like it though

    phillip
    Member

    i like this shot, if it was me i would have put the background a little out of focus draw more attention the the brolly.
    phillip

    sirvad
    Member

    cheers Phillip, might try that all right

    miki g
    Participant

    Hi Sirvad. I like the idea behind this too. Perhaps on a busier street with a lot of other brollies of the same colour (not orange), this could work very well to isolate it in the crowd. I think as John said there are too many colours in this one. Philip’s suggestion of less DOF is a good one too. Perhaps a different shooting angle could work too, such as looking down on it from a height.

    b318isp
    Participant

    I agree with Philip, its a fine shot but better if you could have seperated the background from the subject.

    sirvad
    Member

    cheers guys for the feedback, appreciated !

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