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Out Of The Office Final
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The more I examine my work the more fault I find to the point were I end up disliking a lot of what I do :-). Either way this is the final version of this shot with some minor tweaking on the first attempt . Appreciate your thoughts as ever…..Would you consider cropping out the rocks in the foreground?
I would remove the rainbow as I find it distracting,
Everything else in my opinion is spot on.Thanks John, Re the rainbow , I did have the same thought……ended up leaving it in there as I thought it added to the surreal feeling of the image , I suppose the image is supposed to convey a feeling of surreal escapism, hence the birds flying out onto the canvas, the city guy in his unnatural surroundings and the colour rainbow eminating from the mono image…….BUT you have me thinking again :-)
I like the rainbow. It adds that little something extra and it makes this image the kind of shot that you spend a long time looking at which is the object of the exercise (IMHO).
Nice work. Looking forward to seeing more.
Mark S.
Thanks Mark…..and yes having revisited a few times my decision is thatthe rainbow stays :-)
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