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Parisian Cyclist

  • achtungbarry
    Participant

    Taken on the Pont de Sully behind Notre Dame de Paris.

    Deebo
    Participant

    Very nice shot, lots of nice elements such as the blurred movment, the framing with the foilage and the graffiti
    Nice one indeed
    Dee

    MartinOC
    Participant

    It is a very nice shot, I like the composition, blurred cyclist and graffiti. B&w obviously suits it very well.

    There is just one little niggle for me, I might be imaging it, but the spire seems to be a little bit light as if it was dodged about halfway up.

    Martin

    KWBarbs
    Participant

    I really like this. I agree with both comments (the composition, grafitti etc and the heavy processing), however just ignoring the analysis and looking at the shot I think this is excellent.

    5faythe
    Participant

    Hi Barry,

    I like this photograph and for all the reasons already mentioned.

    Even though I normally prefer if posted images are unframed I
    like the simple frame on this one.

    Well done.

    John.

    hughwphamill
    Participant

    Really like this, though I think I’d prefer it if the spire was poking up between the branches rather than meeting one of them.

    PeteW
    Member

    I’ve come back to this a few times as I think it’s nearly very good, I just feel that the church has been brought out too much and has lost some contrast as a result, looks too false.

    Some work there and this would be very good indeed.

    b318isp
    Participant

    I agree with Pete, the church is too processed – step it back a bit and it would be a fine shot.

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