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I like the last one. That lamp post stands there like a lonely person. Everything in the foreground says solitude, and there is a couple behind them to make a good contrast. I love the framing. Very tight. I feel uncomfortable looking at the bench, and her pose is perfect.
You could try brightening the bushes at her head to separate her a bit more from the background. Otherwise I like that photo a lot.
thnx for that reply i appreciate it!
thats my fave too!can i ask wot makes u uncomfortable bout the bench??
it was one of those quick shots before she looked up and spotted me!think yr rite about lightenin the bushes!! :wink:
Randomway makes some good suggestions there Nicky.
#1 seems a bit burned out in the background as does #3 and I think #2 is a little soft.
You’re doin fine though.Pat
The bench, the lamp post and the lady are so much in your face that it’s almost intimidating. There is no space to enter the photo, the story starts right away. I like it, I have no problem with the tight crop at all.
There is a lot to wonder about in that image, very good capture as I said before.
Re #3. I know you had to seize your opportunity, and it is easy to be picky with someone else’s picture.
Anyway here goes.Maybe if the couple were completely visible.
And it would be better if the second bench were out of the picture. As it is visible, there is the possibility that there is someone sitting there.
HTHhi pixelle
thnx for that!
defo no one sittin on other bench but i see wot u mean! i was toyin with croppin it out or
erasin it but i wont learn so much by doin that i feel!
gettin diff views helps me hugely!are the couple in the back distractin do u think??
im undecided! :roll:Smashing photographs nk, considering that the light looks really tricky. It’s hard to expose for your point of focus being in the shade and other areas of the photograph with great beams of sunlight lighting them.
thanx Harry for yr comments
really appreciate them..wanted to take similar pics (ie lampost +subject)
to see which one i prefer..
defo the last one im thinkin!!?
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