I’m far from an expert on any aspect of photography, but personally speaking I think ‘street photography’ should be engaging in some regard, as in focused on an event, feature or activity, otherwise they’re just ‘a photograph’ which really says nothing.
Lovely tones to the shot but otherwise I think it lacks ‘purpose’. It’s simply a generic scene, busy and distracting and as there’s no ‘focal point’ or ‘issue’ I find it all a little too fussy.