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Photo shoot 27.07.07
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Just noticed your post here. I’m no expert at all on portraiture/fashion
but the pose together with the closing looks quite awkward.I’m not sure which way she is really facing as her legs and face it to the left but
her body is to the right ?I love the lighting in this – i think it screams high fashion. :) Choice of location is just erfect for the tones in the jacket and skirt. I think the composition lets this one down a bit.
I love the direction in which the model is facing (really shows off the detail in both garments), but i just find the position of the arms a bit off. I think a bend in her right arm
would have been perfect.Thanks a lot for any suggestion.
I am trying do my best.That photoshoot was my first ever and wont be last:)
I will work on it more i mean in next time when i will have chance to do some fashion photography.I think, that the background is not doing it’s job, it doesn’t stay in the background, it wants to be equal part of the image. I would like to see the model only without distractions. The lights are very nice and I think, this pose goes well with the dress, both are a bit too complicated and I like them. I think, this is a nice try.
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