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Shot these ladies on Saturday. 1st proper shoot in a while since surgery recovery, so was pretty exhausted afterwards. this was their 1st time in a studio too.
A few to be going with now:
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SofiaMaximovaMemberHi. Great shots! Lovely model, but I think the make up on her is a bit wrong. Her right cheek seems to be darker than the left one.
Love th 6th shot.SodafarlMemberTony like 4 and 6 something about the rest might be the makeup as previously stated.
Keep at it can definitely see improvements since you started this type of shot.Soda
miki gParticipantHi Tony. I think the seventh shot is the best even though it looks a little bright. I think the model looks a bit tense (understandable of course if its not something you’re used to doing in front of a camera), a few laughs beforehand might help her relax more.I reckon a little more practice and you could get it right. I’m not sure if it’s the ladies makeup or the lighting that doesn’t look right. Maybe it’s neither. I hope my comments were helpful but I’m no expert in this type of work either. Best of luck
JMac-2006ParticipantAgree with the comments, the model understandably looks nervous but she shouldnt be bit more practice, the 7th shot for me too, stylish if thats the right phrase, and model expression, cant comment on the technical as only learning myself
Sgt_MajorMemberThanks all, she was a little unsure of what to do, how to stand etc and I’m still experimenting with the lights and stuff, so probably a whole combination of errors lol.
DeeboParticipantSodafarlMemberSgt_MajorMemberAllinthemindParticipant1 and 9 are the best of these IMO. Faces are tricky to do well. It’s often a good idea to hide the asymmetry in someone’s face.
All best
Si
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