I think it’s a great shot and not missing much at all really. Maybe a darker/cloudier sky would have added a bit more oomph, and maybe in B&W? It’s not bad as it is though. Can we see a B&W version if you have it, out of curiosity?
cheers for the feedback Mark.
I have a mono version available. This is the same shot, converted using the channel mixer and then a curves layer added with medium contrast.