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Sleepy head.
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since nobody else is going to…
Nice shot, good spot – a small thing is that it’s a pity you chopped off one of the chair’s legs. :)I will,
Streetsleepers might be a better title. I don’t compose shots based on rules but I find that I’m drawn towards the subjects head and away from the center of the image. A panoramic crop from below his shoes to above the heads of the 2 sitting in the background would bring me through this image more naturally, if you had the feet of the guy on the right of the frame they might finish it nicely too.
Could you have moved the chair out of the way without waking him and gotten closer to him and the wall??
C
“if you had the feet of the guy on the right of the frame they might finish it nicely too.
Could you have moved the chair out of the way without waking him and gotten closer to him and the wall??
C “
Am I the only one finding this category ever more wierd by the day ?
Cookster wrote:
I will,
Streetsleepers might be a better title. I don’t compose shots based on rules but I find that I’m drawn towards the subjects head and away from the center of the image. A panoramic crop from below his shoes to above the heads of the 2 sitting in the background would bring me through this image more naturally, if you had the feet of the guy on the right of the frame they might finish it nicely too.
Could you have moved the chair out of the way without waking him and gotten closer to him and the wall??
C
Well Cookster, I usually just take suggestions, on my shots, on board for future reference, BUT now that you point it out, I did a lousy cropping job first time round. Here’s a new effort based, on your points:
The guy’s goirlfriend had been sittig on “THE CHAIR” and had just moved for a few seconds. She came back and woek her fella up, who immediately looked over at me,,,:(
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