Very first thoughts on the first one was that it’s angled the wrong way, Aidan.
For me if a car was leaning into a corner then the side that’s taking the weight of the car should be the side lower down…as if the car’s weight was pushing the frame down. personally I’d have tried a tighter crop and shallower depth of field as well, just to lose the background a bit.
The second one for me has too much background clutter, and the car is in shade so it doesn’t zing out…it’s almost as if it’s fighting with the bright green grass for attention.
Hope you see those as constructive and honest opinions.