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Some from last month.
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A few I took last month. Nude.. but not very explicit… :( Don’t really know if they belong in this forum.
I like the tones in the top one,
though I do feel that it needs a crop from the top to work properly-
Perhaps the lighting might be a little bit contrasty for the pose adopted-Not too sure about the other two-
is the skin oiled in the second?
perhaps the sharp bend at the knee is producing a form that’s a little bit abrupt-
perhaps a similar observation could be made in the first…Lovely looking model to work with-
joseph
agree with JB – the first one is in a different class to the other two –
the tones and the mood are much more interesting ( although perhaps a ilttle dark) – and I think the upright pose is more natural and softer that the horizontal version in the second
L
Thanks for the comments guys. I consider the first one the best of the three. It was taken with an umbrella closed in on itself and pointed down at her. I’m it sure does need a crop. Maybe off the top and on the right to remove the hand. For the second one the pose was a little uncomfortable for her but I like her expression in it. The knee has an access of oil which we didn’t notice at the time and I should have fixed in PP. The third is the models favourite. I like it too though i’d like the material at her front should be a bit neater.
Dave OS
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