I’m not sure what I think of this, the two sides of the spire are quite nice, but I’m not a fan of the division (though it is very well done). Also the sky bothers me a little, I think I’d rather a lighter sky in this, the overall tone of the sky is quite similar to that of the spire so maybe a lighter sky would give it a little more punch?
If you had posted the spire without the division and lightened the sky a little I think it’d be a stunning shot.