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  • POITIN66
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    this my son , i said jump , and thats just what he did

    nfl-fan
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    I do like the general idea to this shot. The silhouette is perfect and very well defined. Nice ripples in the water.

    The composition is a bit off for me… I think that the young lad should be centred in the frame, maybe with a little extra space beneath the feet to balance up the space above him.

    The surrounds could take a little extra saturation in the reds & yellows to give it some warmth and life.

    The horizon is also crooked… and needs a counter clockwise rotation of about 0.8 of a degree.

    The black stroke around the border is too thick and spoils the presentation a bit for me.

    Still a nice shot… would be pleased if it was my son/photo.

    J

    Rob
    Member

    Everything wot John said, except the bit about saturation; I quite like the muted
    tones of the background and I don’t think the silhouette would look as well with
    too much saturation behind it. Definitely a bit of a shame that you don’t have
    more space at the bottom just to balance things up…

    Rob.

    POITIN66
    Member

    Thanks John and Rob your comments are appreciated and taken on board :)

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