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Stella
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hey guys :) Thanks a million for the comments.
Sean – you’re hardly a beginner now :) Love your recent work.
Jay – this is just a headshot for the model’s portfolio.Hi Ali,
Not interested in commenting on anything but your excellent work. I love your shot and yes the eyeliner works well as the point of darkness there was just something small that was bothering me about it and it took me quite a while to figure it out. I kept going back to it to see what was distracting to my eye and I think you could probably fix it quite easily if you wanted to(it’s probably perfect as I’m no pro) but the eyeliner on the models left eye as you look at the screen seems to come down quite far onto her nose in a smudge where as on the right eye there are perfect corners. I’m not sure if I have made sense here I think what I am trying to say is the darkness on the left corner is quite heavy compared to the rest of it. It really is a brilliant shot. Best of Luck with the “A”
Terry
I don’t think so, at least on this monitor it seems as if her right eye is in deeper shadow at that point.
“it seems as if her right eye is in deeper shadow at that point.”
HI p&s it is the models right eye I am refering to but as you look at the monitor it is the eye on the left hand said of the screen.
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