The 3rd shot in the triptyche is the best one for me. Interesting “Attitude”, I think that works against the white and is a good angle on Carrie. The outfit she has on and the angles you have her posed at just make me look to her tummy. The compositions generally are a little tight to the corners for me Gerard.
The first one has promise, just a bit more room to breathe would help I think, or crop it to retain Carrie only, nice angles in that, (these are only my opinions), the last one I’m afraid doesn’t work at all unless you’re going for an upskirt shot? Her legs look short, the flower arrangement to the right is coming into shot and confusing the composition and again, my attention is drawn to her tummy rather than her striking face.
The background on the BW photos is nice. I usually do not like that kind of “romantic” setup, but here it works well. It gives a good atmosphere. The crop on these picture is IMO too tight, I would have liked some air up and down.
Concerning the colour pics, on the triptyche there are some shadows on the background that are not present on the second picture. I wonder why. The model is very good for expressions and poses. Nice shots.