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  • Jem
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    I was not sure which category to put this into but here it is! Appreciate all criticism and comments.


    Subway by Jem173, on Flickr

    Isabella
    Participant

    i think its interesting, i like the framing. i think it might be improved by chopping off the bottom just below the red writing though as the space above looks a little cramped and makes me want to be able to shove the frame up a bit

    davedunne
    Participant

    I too like the framing and I like the color. One thing that distracts me is that you are at a slight angle. I think I would have preferred this shot more if you had shuffled a little to the right and made the shot more face on.

    Jem
    Participant

    Thanks guys for comments. Will do Isabella.

    wirepic
    Participant

    Had a look at this on flickr. Nice one. As I said I like this kind of thing. A B&W conversion and some straightening of the pillars using perspective control could make a great deal of difference to this photo.

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