Homepage › Forums › Photo Critique › People › Summer Afternoon This topic is empty. Summer Afternoon AlessiaParticipant November 21, 2009 at 5:45 pm in an irish sunny village! PhotoSligoMember November 21, 2009 at 10:30 pm Contrast!! Love it: – coke and coffee -old man and new car -sleep and outside (bussy road and peacefull:) perfect -conv. to b&w hate: to much bottom (will cut below his elbow) jb7Participant November 21, 2009 at 10:44 pm Very good- looks like he’s going to get burnt… DeeboParticipant November 22, 2009 at 9:49 am Really good shot like this. Dee miki gParticipant November 22, 2009 at 10:50 am Ah the good days :D . I find the car directly behind him distracting and would agree with Photosligo about a crop to the elbow. Nice shot. 5faytheParticipant November 22, 2009 at 12:23 pm Hi Alessia, I like this. The DOF I think works well. Mono suits. The car light in the bottom RHS is my only quibble. Well done. John. AllinthemindParticipant November 23, 2009 at 8:29 am 5faythe wrote: Hi Alessia, I like this. The DOF I think works well. Mono suits. The car light in the bottom RHS is my only quibble. Well done. John. +1 on the bottom right headlamp. I think you could pull the white point up a bit too. Nicely seen and captured. Si SALCONMember November 23, 2009 at 1:38 pm I love this , very nice Viewing 8 posts - 1 through 8 (of 8 total) You must be logged in to reply to this topic.