I like it. I personally would have put the focus on the middle swing rather than the first one.
The colours are quite strong, but I agree that there is something missing that could add an extra ‘pop’ to it!
I like this but I think that the shallow DOF doesn’t do anything for it. The colors of the poles are not strong enough because of the DOF. I think that if everything was in sharp focus and with a little tweek in PS and you would have a fine image.
Dave