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Tanya
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I see Lorraine has beaten me to it, by posting a shot of Tanya already :shock: Where she went with flash, I opted to make use of available light.
Comments welcome
Very very nice Ciaran. Especially like the vibrancy of the colours here, almost garish
in comparison to some of your other colour work but really suits this image…Tiny niggle is that wisp of hair just obscuring the pupil of the right eye – it almost looks
deliberate, as though you’ve set out to deny us the full view of both eyes… ;)Lovely composition, lovely colour, lovely photography…
Again with the obscured eye!
I think you’re right and it is deliberate Rob.
I like this picture as well. I think seeing a bit more of her top might have worked.
I also think the background is slightly distracting, but nothing major.Very Nice, love the eyes and expression. Looks like you’ve used a white reflector to the right of the model, maybe bring it nearer to the lens axis to allow a slight shadow as her face “goes around the corner”. You’ve sort of flattened the modelling a bit.
Si
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