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Madra RuaParticipant
I don’t know this lady but I couldn’t resist this shot when I noticed how the light framed her hair.
She was playing with her mobile phone while sitting on a bench by the Grand Canal in the (rare) summer evening sunlight.
I would have liked more space on the right, but I didn’t frame that right.
I would have also preferred not to have the busses in the back… but what can you do…?jb7ParticipantNice shot Hauke-
could easily be a stock kinda candidate-There is an obvious crop, to remove the bus,
or at least, the back of the bus;
in a way, I’m sorry I saw the bus in the first place-
the picture would be so much more focussed without it-Good stuff-
j
CoveyParticipantMadra RuaParticipantjb7 wrote:
There is an obvious crop, to remove the bus,
or at least, the back of the bus;Thanks Joseph.
I felt that cropping out the bus or busses it would get too tight.
The space in front of Gilbert seems to be necessary to make this work imho
Might try it anyway.ExpresbroParticipantCovey wrote:
Lady?
It’s Gilbert O’Sullivan :lol:
Nah..!! It’s Brian May from Queen!!!
It’s a nice shot Hauke…and I’m sure there are several good cropping options open to you. Lovely summers evening feel to it.
GfoxParticipantjoe_elwayParticipantPuckpicsMemberjoe_elway wrote:
Wouldn’t change a thing.
I second Joe’s comment – personally I’d be really pleased with this image and would be putting it in as a stock image for sale – it might be worth punting round the mobile phone companies for commerical sale imho it’s good enough
Madra RuaParticipantPuckpics wrote:
I second Joe’s comment – personally I’d be really pleased with this image and would be putting it in as a stock image for sale – it might be worth punting round the mobile phone companies for commerical sale imho it’s good enough
Uhhh….really? Never sold a photo in my life. Where do I go? Who do I contact in the mobile phone companies?
FlipflipParticipantIve come back to this about 6 times now.
Was trying to think of something worthwhile to say, but all I can say is you nailed it. Wouldnt change a thing about it.
sm323fMemberAllinthemindParticipantRobMemberSuperb shot Hauke. Really well spotted.
To my shame I’d probably have walked right
past this one without seeing it…Rob.
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