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That loving look
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lousyParticipant
This is the bride having a loving gase at the groom and I just captured her ‘look’ and I was quite pleased with the result.
Of course I would be very interested to hear any or all c&c
Pat
Punk RockMemberThis may silly but she could very well be gazing at the ceiling tapestry!
It’d be better if you seen the Groom.lousyParticipant[quoteThis may silly but she could very well be gazing at the ceiling tapestry!
It’d be better if you seen the Groom.][/quote]mmmmm I take your point, but have you ever seen a woman look at the ceiling like that?
Pat
HelenParticipantAh Pat
do you really want us women to answer that question? :D :D :D
Still its a nice shot of the bride and I am sure she will love it.
MDCPhotographyParticipantJodyParticipantHelen wrote:
Ah Pat
do you really want us women to answer that question? :D :D :D
Boom Boom :D
Lovely shot Pat. The light is good and there’s excellent clarity in her face
RobMemberLovely expression caught there Pat. There are a couple of things
you could take a look at here though that might improve the image..
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Firstly, part of the reason the bride appears to be looking even higher
than she actually is is because your camera isn’t quite level, obvious
from the verticals in the background. A quick straighten will lessen
this effect. Also, a little more space at the bottom to include the
pendant/necklace would prevent that interrupted line across the bottom
of the frame. The exposure is pretty good with the exception of the
veil which looks a little grey, though had you exposed for the veil, the
hotspots on the skin might have been more intrusive…I’ve taken the liberty of trying a quick edit, just to lighten the veil, warm the skin tones
with just a little smoothing, and a quick straighten just to show what I mean…Rob.
lousyParticipantThanks Helen, Martyn Jody and Rob.
Rob. Thanks for the advise there Rob and I can see the improvements in your edit, and as always very much appreciated.
Pat
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