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  • RASMITH32
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    started out with an idea of a fantasy portrait of my son looking out the window at a fantasy land and I guess Im half way there !…..Now the hard part…getting a one year old to sit looking out a window and process him so the pictures merge! :-)….Anyway, appreciate your thoughts on the landscape…….Managed to get the tree from Caton House in there :-)

    shutterbug
    Participant

    I always enjoy looking at your creations, there is always something to look at.
    Just something that is catching my eye in this one is the pink swirl effect over
    the rocks behind the red balloon they seem to be a bit heavy handed there and
    might look better if it was a little less obvious?

    RASMITH32
    Member

    Thanks SB and yes you are spot on and coincidently have just removed the pink swirl, didnt sit well. Decided to leave it as a fantasy landscape as my PS skills were being pushed in trying to create what I had in my head,,,,,,Need to upskill :-)…New and final version as follows….

    Alternative version also……..

    shutterbug
    Participant

    Much better, like the bunch of balloons :)

    smbee
    Member

    Hey,

    I really like this.
    was going to say that either more balloons or no balloons would be better. So love the the bunch of balloons!
    Small thing – the solo balloons look glossy, but the bunch look matt, I think they should all be glossy. Also I think you should add more colours to the bunch.

    BTW – do not like the B/W –

    RASMITH32
    Member

    good point re the glossy versus matt balloons!, hadnt noticed :-)

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