- This topic is empty.
The Entrepreneur
-
i like it.
the subject is very isolated, distanced from both the viewer and his goal. if for instance he was coming into the frame from the bottom left corner, and only part of his right shoulder and hat in the frame, there would be more of a sense of identifying with the man and sharing his goal. as it is he is out there on his own, which i would imagine is what you were going for.
just an observation and a thought
Viewing 2 posts - 1 through 2 (of 2 total)
You must be logged in to reply to this topic.
