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The mono look

  • markst33
    Participant

    Another shot of Jordyn from the shoot in Applerock studios using studio lighting for the first time.

    brendancullen
    Participant

    Hi Mark,

    The ‘holy communion’ hands just look a little out of place and i think she is way to close to the backdrop. I would have left the tips of her elbows in the frame.The catch lights it the eyes are very nice.

    bren

    dan.browne
    Participant

    mark,

    the B&W conversion is fine and her eyes are pin sharp (to me anyway) but the pose doesn’t work for me. Her mouth looks very stern and I think that to have her far hand come across to her shoulder would have added a nice touch.

    markst33
    Participant

    Cheers Dan, I don’t have much experience working with models (this is my second time) so I find giving them directions especially what to do with their hands a bit difficult. Also there was 4 of us to a model so you felt under pressure to get the shot and let someone else have a go. But its all a learning experience :)

    Thanks for taking the time to comment.

    Mark S.

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