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The Pier
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Very graphical qualities to this Alan. Again, I like the simplicity and
starkness. This 50/50 split thing is really catching on. I must phone Mick
and tell him… ;)Rob.
You ain’t half on a roll today!
Have to say I quite like this one. It’s sort of quirky, the composition defies all the rules but it’s simplicty (composition and muted tones) work well.
Not that I know anything much about printing, but I would be curious to see this printed.
J
Tinkle tinkle tinkle as the penny drops. Before you know it I’ll have you hooked!
Cheers Rob – I made a reply to your suggestion elsewhere!
Alan
Excellent in simplicity.
Sometimes hardest it is found simple frames.
I always I have problems with this.Eric.
Hi Alan,
i like this photo and not… SORRY!
It’s nice when I go from left side…. but I don’t like the right side because the ‘sharp cut’ of the object….
the strong line above the pier doesn’t look good …. IMO!!!!Another simple and effective shot, u are on a roll
I like the 50 50 split too, works well hereFor my humble hap’oth just the right space at the left of the pier makes the picture. Very striking,
Alan
This is a nice image but I feel some changes would make it a lot stronger. Cropping a smaller square so that the pier stretches the full way across the frame, and so that the white section is removed, might work. Also, I think stronger toning and/or burning of the sky/sea to reveal a little texture would be useful.
Steve
Very nice Alan, like the composition. don’t think it would work at all if the pier went all the way across
I really like the white bit on the RHS as well and I would just love to be able to do this kind of processing
film or digital.Love it
Sinead.This one is really growing on me. I prefer it over the rocks. Wasnt sure when I first saw it. Your subject in these would have to be absolutely spot on sharp (im sure it is) for them to work. Very interesting image. I like the way the pier ends on the left so you can go aroud it.
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