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The point of no return

  • Luc
    Participant

    Surely one of my strongest image.
    CC welcomed!

    Jay King
    Participant

    I like the way you can’t really make it out… but you know what’s happening. The tear / running makeup and the title really confirm what you are seeing.

    The contrast is strong… white and black – life and death. The eyes looking away work well too… the desperation and fear showing through.

    Very strong alright.

    Luc
    Participant

    Thank you for your comments, Jay!

    I am quite disappointed to have so few comments. I really thought that this kind of subject would bring more…
    I was even afraid that some would react “violently”…

    richiehatch
    Member

    I am not really into portraiture but I like the composition and conversion of this image. I am distracted by the softness of the overall image…. Are the eyes sharp in the original image…? Maybe its a style thing…! Also maybe its just me but it took me ages to figure out what was happening with the arm….! Now that I have figured it out I understand the image better…! I can see why ye might have expected a ‘violent’ reaction. The subject matter is a bit risky…!

    Richie

    PeteTheBloke
    Member

    Luc. I’ve just found this. What a scary photo.
    You have managed to capture the utter desolation without being
    crudely obvious about it. Heavens knows what you took this photo
    for – I hope it wasn’t for fun. I imagine some sort of commissioned job?
    It’ll haunt me. I am appalled and, simultaneously, very impressed.

    jb7
    Participant

    I’ve just figured out what it represents-
    helped in no small part by the obvious retouching of the strap-

    It looks like a staged shot;
    it seems too fetish and chic to be a documentary picture-
    almost a fashion shot really-

    And as such,
    its difficult for me to find it shocking-

    Though as usual,
    I’m probably wrong-

    Good attention to detail;
    perhaps if it were to be seen in some form of context, then
    the retouching might not be altogether necessary-
    and a little more depth of field might have obviated it too-

    Striking shot-

    j

    Alan Rossiter
    Participant

    I thought it was just me but I agree with Joseph. It isn’t shocking. Thought provoking, yes but it’s too staged for the shock factor.

    I’ve been here several times as it is a well framed shot, great influential finishing and a lot of thought went into the creation. It isn’t my forte though so I can’t critique like most others could.

    But yeah, interesting, not shocking.

    Alan.

    rm
    Member

    As an image it’s trying a bit to hard for my liking. A bit ’emo’ you might say. What is it about? The desperation and desolation of a hard core drugs habit? … or an S&M sex fetish? … or of contemplating suicide? … or of the baby doll presure put on young women?

    As for a reaction? A sickening sence of realisation followed by a desire to tell some one to ‘get a grip’ followed by confusion as the other posablities came to mind.

    Luc
    Participant

    Many thanks for the comments, they are appreciated.

    Richie, the original is on a BW film and the light was pretty bad. That can explain the softness.

    Joseph, I do not understand where you see a strap?
    She is holding a knife, and I did not do any processing.

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