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Tower near the NAUL
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i t looks a bit dull to me but of course: it was a dull day ( ;
the composition idea works well….there is just something missing in it for me. cheers M*Colours are very good for me, I think the camera might have been focussed a little further in the distance, also the tower doesn’t look quite straight vertical. its a nice idea though. madeline might be right about it missing something, perhaps some bird movement or something like that would complete it.
I lke this – I agree with the verticals. What is a little offputting IMO is the brigth foreground relative to the dark background.
Also IMHO I find the line of the crops takes my eye away from the tower. Maybe thats why it
seems to be ‘lacking something’. If it was possible to get a line on the crops leading to
the tower it might be a better composition.I don’t live to far from this area. Would you have directions to the tower from Swords ?
no its out the back of Belewstown, near the naul. its in the middle of nowhere.
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