I hope this one doesn’t break the rules… I challenged myself to “Travel light”. Fuji S3 in jpg mode and no light modifiers. Ok, I toned it, otherwise, as is. If this had been a RAW shot, I would have bumped the contrast a bit and brushed in the brickwork a bit more. Also put a flash beyond her to give more of an edge light. The upside is that this took a minute in PS to tone and resize.
Thanks folks, it certainly made me “look” for the light more. Stephen, what do you mean about hair detail? I can see plenty of tone and texture, is your monitor adjusted? Thanks again