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  • John Dunne
    Participant

    c&C on improvements please

    Rodcunha
    Participant

    Maybe Travel would be the best section for it John but it’s a fantastic shot of the venice landscape!

    Congratulations for a great photo!

    Regards,

    Rod

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Forgot about that section, thanks rod.

    Rob
    Member

    John,

    Love the panoramic aspect, and the colours you’ve captured.
    But I must admit to finding the movement of the gondolas
    quite jarring. Fantastic view, but perhaps not one for long
    exposures, unless of course the gondolas are elsewhere…

    Rob.

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Thanks Rob. I used some nd filters to purposely create the movement. Venice can be very mystical underneath the skin, and that was my influence. I accept your point of view nonetheless and thank you most sincerely for commenting.

    SteveD
    Participant

    John, this is one of the best photos I have seen on this forum. The use of filters was an inspired choice IMO, and you achieved exactly what you set out to do.

    I was curious as to how a monochrome edit would look, so I gave it a go:

    Process was an orthochromatic style B&W conversion, and a palladium toning with level and contrast enhancements. Love the original, this is just an alternative for you.

    Steve

    John Dunne
    Participant

    Thanks for your comments Steve. Wow I like the conversion. It now looks like it could have been taken any time in the last hundred years

    Fintan
    Participant

    what a stunner John, well done. I’m struggling to think of any improvements. Would you consider cropping to remove the lantern on the right hand side, its pulling my eye too far right. Or maybe it balances it, I’m uncertain. Maybe you could make the lantern post into one of the other posts.

    carl
    Participant

    Lovely, lovely shot John! Makes my Venice shots look ordinary. Love the movement and btw I think it looks perfect as it is.

    Fintan
    Participant

    carl wrote:

    Love the movement and btw I think it looks perfect as it is.

    I agree and having seen the print, take back my right lantern suggestion.

    Alan153
    Participant

    I could swear I saws this photo in monochrome in a recent photography magazine..!! Is there applause/credit to be dished out?

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