Homepage › Forums › Photo Critique › People › Watching the day go by…. This topic is empty. Watching the day go by…. neilwhiteParticipant October 19, 2009 at 8:54 am Spotted this man sitting on a wall on a street in Spain and tried to make a shot of it. Not sure if there is too much space to the left of the frame or even if the shot works at all. C&C appreciated Neil PixelleMember October 19, 2009 at 4:55 pm Works for me. I like the lines of the walls, path, etc. The title is suitable given the subject’s expression. Are his hands a little dark? bingbongbiddleyParticipant October 19, 2009 at 7:56 pm I like this. The composition is good I think. A bit more space above his head would have been better. I like the B&W but as with many monochrome pictures I wonder what the colour version would look like. I like that he’s wearing relatively modern looking runners. Viewing 3 posts - 1 through 3 (of 3 total) You must be logged in to reply to this topic.